Day 006 — Review: Writing Task 2 基礎復習(インターネットと人間関係)

2026-04-19 Phase 1 — Band 5.5 目標 弱点補強(Review) 40分 / 250語以上

背景知識

Writing Task 2 の評価基準(Band Descriptors)

略称意味
Task ResponseTR設問への回答・主張の明確さ
Coherence & CohesionCC文章の論理的流れ・接続語の使い方
Lexical ResourceLR語彙の多様さ・正確さ
Grammatical Range & AccuracyGRA文法の多様さ・正確さ

5段落構成(基本型)

Paragraph 1: Introduction(問題の言い換え+自分の立場)
Paragraph 2: Body 1(主な理由・根拠1)
Paragraph 3: Body 2(主な理由・根拠2)
Paragraph 4: Body 3(反対意見への反論、または追加理由)
Paragraph 5: Conclusion(立場の再確認・まとめ)

必須の接続表現

機能表現
主張In my view, / I firmly believe that
理由because / since / as
例示For example, / For instance,
追加Furthermore, / In addition, / Moreover,
譲歩Although / While / Even though
反論However, / Nevertheless, / That said,
結論In conclusion, / To sum up,

問題文

⏱ 制限時間:40分 目標語数:250語以上

Some people believe that the internet has made people more isolated and less able to form real relationships. Others argue that it has improved people's ability to connect with others.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Write at least 250 words. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

構成ガイド

この問題は "Discuss both views + opinion" 型です。

段落内容語数目安
Introduction背景文+両方の見方を紹介+自分の立場を一文で50〜60語
Body 1「孤立させる」側の意見 + 具体例70〜80語
Body 2「繋がりを改善する」側の意見 + 具体例70〜80語
Body 3(任意)自分の立場をより詳しく述べる40〜50語
Conclusion両面を認めつつ自分の立場を再確認40〜50語

有用表現・語彙

テーマ関連語彙

foster genuine connections(本当の繋がりを育てる) superficial interactions(表面的なやり取り) digital natives(デジタルネイティブ世代) face-to-face communication(対面コミュニケーション) lead to social withdrawal(社会的孤立につながる) facilitate communication(コミュニケーションを促進する) geographically distant(地理的に離れた)

ヒント(段階的開示)

ヒント1(方向性)

「インターネット = 孤立」「インターネット = 繋がり」の両方に具体的な理由と例を用意しましょう。日常の経験(SNS、遠方の友人との連絡等)を使えます。

ヒント2(論点例)

孤立側の論点:

  • スマートフォンを見ながら食事 → 家族との対話が減る
  • オンラインゲームへの没頭 → 実生活の友人関係が希薄に

繋がり側の論点:

  • 海外の友人・遠方の家族と毎日連絡できる
  • 共通の趣味を持つコミュニティに参加できる
ヒント3(骨格例)
The internet has fundamentally changed the way people interact. While some argue that it has created more isolated individuals, others believe it has strengthened human connections. In my view, the internet has done more to connect people than divide them.

モデル解答(Band 7.5〜8.0相当)

Introduction

The internet has fundamentally transformed how humans interact, sparking debate about whether this change has been beneficial or harmful to social bonds. While there are legitimate concerns about digital isolation, I believe that the internet has, on balance, enhanced our capacity for meaningful connection.

Body 1(孤立側)

Those who argue that the internet isolates individuals point to the prevalence of shallow, screen-mediated interactions. When people scroll through social media feeds rather than engaging in face-to-face conversations, relationships may become more superficial. Research suggests that heavy social media use is associated with increased feelings of loneliness, particularly among young people who may substitute online validation for genuine emotional intimacy. In crowded restaurants, it is increasingly common to see families staring at their phones rather than speaking to each other, highlighting how digital devices can create physical presence with emotional absence.

Body 2(繋がり側)

On the other hand, the internet has enabled connections that would have been impossible in previous generations. Individuals living in rural areas or those with niche interests can now find communities of like-minded people worldwide. Moreover, the internet allows families separated by immigration or work to maintain daily contact through video calls, effectively bridging geographical distance. In this sense, technology has not replaced human connection but extended its reach far beyond what was previously achievable.

Conclusion

In conclusion, while the internet carries risks of social withdrawal when misused, its potential to facilitate genuine, far-reaching connections is far greater. The key lies not in the technology itself, but in how individuals choose to engage with it.

語数: 234語

モデル解答の解説(4軸分析)

評価軸ポイント
TR両方の立場を明確に論じ、"on balance" で自分の立場を明確化
CC段落ごとに明確なトピックセンテンス / "On the other hand" / "Moreover" / "In this sense" で流れを構築
LRscreen-mediated interactions / emotional intimacy / like-minded people / bridging geographical distance
GRAResearch suggests that... / it is increasingly common to see... / 関係代名詞や分詞構文を活用した複文構造

よくある日本人のミス

ミス原因正しい書き方
"I think internet is good."冠詞・主張の弱さ"I believe that the internet has..."
"Because internet, people connect."接続詞の使い方"Because of the internet, people can..."
connect を3回繰り返す語彙の少なさconnect → facilitate / foster / strengthen
Conclusionで新しい情報を入れる構成ルールの誤解Conclusionは要約のみ

自己評価

理解度

語数・所要時間

自分の解答

気づき・メモ


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