Day 014 — Writing Task 2: Technology & Society(スマートフォンと人間関係)

2026-04-27 Phase 1 — Band 5.5 目標 Writing Task 2 40分 / 250語以上

背景知識 — Writing Task 2 評価基準(4軸)

略称内容
Task ResponseTR設問への回答・主張の明確さ
Coherence & CohesionCC段落構成・接続語・流れの一貫性
Lexical ResourceLR語彙の多様性・正確さ
Grammatical Range & AccuracyGRA文法の幅広さ・正確さ
"To what extent": おおむね賛成だが例外もある型のバランス論が書きやすい

問題文

⏰ 制限時間:40分 目標語数:250語以上

Some people believe that the widespread use of smartphones has had a predominantly negative impact on interpersonal relationships and social skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

構成ガイド

Introduction: 背景 → 自分の立場(thesis statement)
Body 1: 主な根拠1 + 具体例
Body 2: 主な根拠2 + 具体例
Conclusion: 立場の再確認 + 含意

有用表現

interpersonal relationshipsface-to-face interactionsuperficial connectionsbe glued to one's phoneundeniablyon balance

ヒント

ヒント1

賛成側: 対面コミュニケーションの減少 / SNS「いいね」文化の問題
反対側: 遠距離関係の維持 / 内向的な人のコミュニケーション

モデル解答(Band 7.5〜8.0相当)

Introduction

The proliferation of smartphones has transformed the way people communicate, leading many to argue that these devices have significantly harmed interpersonal relationships and social competence. I largely agree with this view, though I acknowledge that smartphones can also play a constructive role in maintaining certain types of relationships.

Body 1(賛成:対面交流への悪影響)

The most compelling argument in favour of this position is that constant smartphone use has eroded the quality of face-to-face interaction. Research by psychologist Sherry Turkle has shown that even the mere presence of a phone on a table reduces the depth of conversation between people. A common example is 'phubbing' — the act of snubbing someone in a social setting — which signals to others that virtual notifications are more important than their presence. Over time, this habitual behaviour diminishes people's capacity for empathy and active listening.

Body 2(反論:遠距離コミュニケーション)

Nevertheless, it would be an oversimplification to dismiss smartphones as entirely detrimental. For individuals who live far from their families or friends, video calling applications such as FaceTime or WhatsApp have made it possible to sustain intimate connections that would otherwise weaken with distance. Similarly, for introverted individuals or those with social anxiety, digital communication offers a less intimidating platform.

Conclusion

On balance, while smartphones undeniably serve as valuable tools for long-distance communication, their overall effect on everyday social skills and interpersonal depth is predominantly negative. Society would benefit from developing greater awareness of mindful smartphone use.

253語

モデル解答の解説(4軸分析)

評価軸ポイント
TR"largely agree with reservations" を冒頭で明示
CC"The most compelling..." → "Nevertheless..." → "On balance..."
LRproliferation / eroded / phubbing / cornerstones / intimidating
GRA複文 / 仮定法的表現 / 副詞節

よくある日本人のミス

ミス正しい書き方
立場が不明確"I firmly believe that..."と明示
Conclusionで新情報Conclusionは要約のみ
語数250語未満書き終わったら語数カウント

自己評価


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