Day 021 — Writing Task 2: テクノロジーと人間関係(Discussion Essay)

2026-05-04 Phase 1 — Band 5.5 目標 Writing Task 2 40分 / 250語以上

背景知識 — Writing Task 2 評価基準(4軸)

略称内容
Task ResponseTR設問への回答・主張の明確さ
Coherence & CohesionCC段落構成・接続語・流れの一貫性
Lexical ResourceLR語彙の多様性・正確さ
Grammatical Range & AccuracyGRA文法の幅広さ・正確さ
Discussion Essay: 両方の観点を公平に述べた上で自分の立場を示す

問題文

⏰ 制限時間:40分 目標語数:250語以上

Some people believe that modern technology has improved human relationships by making communication easier. Others argue that these technologies have weakened genuine human connections. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

構成ガイド

Introduction: 背景 → 自分の立場(thesis statement)
Body 1: 主な根拠1 + 具体例
Body 2: 主な根拠2 + 具体例
Conclusion: 立場の再確認 + 含意

有用表現

foster meaningful connectionssuperficial interactionsbridge geographical distancesbe preoccupied withauthentic relationship

ヒント

ヒント1

肯定側: 遠距離関係の維持 / 共通趣味コミュニティの形成
否定側: スマホ依存による対面交流の減少 / テキスト中心の感情表現の貧困化

モデル解答(Band 7.5〜8.0相当)

Introduction

Modern technology has profoundly changed how people interact, sparking debate about whether it strengthens or erodes human bonds. While some see digital tools as catalysts for closer relationships, others believe they undermine genuine connection. I would argue that technology is a double-edged sword, and its impact depends largely on how it is used.

Body 1(肯定側:地理的距離の克服)

Proponents of technology point to its remarkable ability to bridge geographical distances. Platforms such as video calling applications and social media allow people separated by thousands of miles to maintain close relationships in real time. A parent working abroad can still witness a child's first steps, and friends from different continents can share daily experiences instantly.

Body 2(否定側:表面的交流の問題)

However, critics rightly observe that digital communication often promotes superficial interactions at the expense of deeper bonds. Many people scroll through social media rather than engaging meaningfully with those sitting beside them. Research suggests that heavy smartphone use during social gatherings reduces the quality of face-to-face conversation.

Conclusion

In conclusion, modern technology offers both opportunities and risks for human relationships. While it undeniably facilitates connection across distances, it can simultaneously erode the quality of close, in-person relationships if used without mindfulness. The key lies in conscious, intentional use of these tools.

236語(本番では250語以上)

モデル解答の解説(4軸分析)

評価軸ポイント
TR"While some see... others believe... I would argue" で両側+自分の立場を提示
CCwhile / Proponents of / However / In conclusion で論理展開
LRdouble-edged sword / catalysts for / at the expense of / mindfulness
GRA関係代名詞節 / 仮定的表現

よくある日本人のミス

ミス正しい書き方
立場が不明確"I firmly believe that..."と明示
Conclusionで新情報Conclusionは要約のみ
語数250語未満書き終わったら語数カウント

自己評価


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