Day 028 — Writing Task 2: Opinion Essay(スマートフォンと意味ある関係)

2026-05-11 Phase 1 — Band 5.5 目標 Writing Task 2 40分 / 250語以上

背景知識 — Writing Task 2 評価基準(4軸)

略称内容
Task ResponseTR設問への回答・主張の明確さ
Coherence & CohesionCC段落構成・接続語・流れの一貫性
Lexical ResourceLR語彙の多様性・正確さ
Grammatical Range & AccuracyGRA文法の幅広さ・正確さ
"To what extent": 「部分的に同意(partially agree)」型が書きやすい

問題文

⏰ 制限時間:40分 目標語数:250語以上

Some people believe that modern technology, such as smartphones and social media, has made it harder for people to form meaningful relationships. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

構成ガイド

Introduction: 背景 → 自分の立場(thesis statement)
Body 1: 主な根拠1 + 具体例
Body 2: 主な根拠2 + 具体例
Conclusion: 立場の再確認 + 含意

有用表現

meaningful relationshipsface-to-face interactionsuperficial connectionsfosterto a large extentundeniably

ヒント

ヒント1

賛成側: SNSの浅いやりとり / スマホが対面交流の質を下げる
反対側: 遠距離の家族・友人との連絡が容易 / 共通趣味コミュニティが本当の友情に発展

モデル解答(Band 7.5〜8.0相当)

Introduction

Modern technology has fundamentally changed the nature of human communication, enabling instant connection across vast distances. While some contend that developments such as smartphones and social media have eroded the depth of interpersonal relationships, I partially agree with this view, as the impact of technology depends significantly on how it is used.

Body 1(表面的交流の問題)

On the one hand, the proliferation of social media platforms has undeniably encouraged shallow interaction at the expense of meaningful communication. Many users engage primarily through 'likes,' brief comments, and curated posts rather than engaging in genuine dialogue. Furthermore, the constant distraction of smartphones during face-to-face meetings diminishes the quality of in-person conversations, preventing the emotional depth necessary for lasting bonds.

Body 2(地理的距離の克服)

On the other hand, technology has also provided powerful tools for maintaining and deepening relationships across geographic boundaries. Video calling platforms such as Zoom and FaceTime allow families and friends separated by thousands of kilometres to share experiences in real time. Moreover, online communities centred around shared interests often lead to genuine, long-term friendships that transition into the real world.

Conclusion

In conclusion, while modern technology does present obstacles to forming deep relationships — particularly through fostering superficial online habits — it also offers unprecedented opportunities for connection. The key lies not in the technology itself, but in the intentional and mindful way in which individuals choose to engage with it.

234語

モデル解答の解説(4軸分析)

評価軸ポイント
TR"partially agree" という立場を冒頭で明示 / 両側の議論を提示しながら自分の意見を保つ
CC"On the one hand / On the other hand" / Furthermore / Moreover / In conclusion
LRproliferation / curated posts / fostering superficial habits / intentional and mindful
GRA関係代名詞節 / 分詞構文 / 強調構文

よくある日本人のミス

ミス正しい書き方
立場が不明確"I firmly believe that..."と明示
Conclusionで新情報Conclusionは要約のみ
語数250語未満書き終わったら語数カウント

自己評価


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